New Apartment: Preliminary Contract Signed (Sep. 7, 2026)

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2026. 9. 7. ยท ๋นจ๊ฐ„ํŽœ ์ฒจ์‚ญ

During last weekend, there was such a big milestone was establisheda big milestone was reached1. We've finally made a pre-contractsigned a preliminary contract2 for a new apartment. Currently, my family liveslives in3 a 1-bedroom studio, which we call 2-bay room in Koreaone-bedroom unit4. The space is only 33 square metersquare meters5 that is never enoughwhich is nowhere near enough6 for 4 family membersa family of four7 to live a normal lifelive comfortably6.

Anyway, after searching for 40 apartments and visiting about 20 ones20 of them8 in person to look into the inner structure and conditions, my wife an Imy wife and I9 eventually made up our mindmade up our minds10 to select one. First of all, we chose two promising candidates. One is the one that hashad11 already replaced almost all of the interior parts with new ones a five years ago and maintained cleanhas been kept clean since12. However, they don't still havestill don't have13 system air-conditioners. Another has also well kepthas also been well kept14 for a decade, but there's no footprint of interior replacementshows no sign of any interior renovation15. Either one has necessity of remodeling construction, not even full operationsEither way, some remodeling would be necessary, though not a full renovation16.

The first candidate's price was 440M KRW and I thought that was not so propera bit too high17 because it doesn't have system air conditioners. Therefore I tried to ask for a discount by 10M KRW, but the host denied my suggestion, counter-proposingthe seller declined, countering with18 a 5M KRW-discount. The other issue was the entering datemove-in date19, Jan. 10th, 2027. Since our current renting studio contract is expiredlease expires20 on 18-Jan, 2027, that date is not enough for us to prepare and execute the remodeling constructioncarry out the remodeling21.

On the other hand, the second candidate accepted my proposal discounting by 10M KRW, and they told us that they could leave untilmove out by22 18-Dec, 2026 which is sufficient to complete the interior construction. Hence, we determined the pre-contractfinalized the preliminary contract23 with the second one by sending the pre-contract fee, 5M KRW last Saturday. In this weekThis week24, we're going to make an official contract under the real-estate agent's interventionwith the help of the real-estate agent25. Then, we are going to start the real preparation. I look forward to dreaming how we makecan't wait to start dreaming up ways to make26 my new apartment more clean and beautiful.


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  1. ๋™์‚ฌ๊ฐ€ ๋‘ ๋ฒˆ ๊ฒน์นจ โ€” "there was ~ was established" โ†’ ํ•˜๋‚˜๋งŒ.
  2. ๊ณ„์•ฝ์€ make๊ฐ€ ์•„๋‹ˆ๋ผ sign.
  3. live ๋’ค ์žฅ์†Œ์—” ๋ฐ˜๋“œ์‹œ in.
  4. studio=๋ฐฉ ๋ฏธ๋ถ„๋ฆฌ ์›๋ฃธ์ด๋ผ ์นจ์‹ค ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ตฌ์กฐ์™€ ๋ชจ์ˆœ โ†’ one-bedroom unit.
  5. ์ˆซ์ž 1 ์ดˆ๊ณผ๋ฉด ๋‹จ์œ„๋ช…์‚ฌ ๋ณต์ˆ˜.
  6. "never enough that" ์–ด์ƒ‰ โ†’ nowhere near enough.
  7. "์ˆซ์ž+family members"๋ณด๋‹ค "a family of ์ˆซ์ž"๊ฐ€ ์ž์—ฐ์Šค๋Ÿฌ์›€.
  8. ones๋ณด๋‹ค of them.
  9. an โ†’ and ์˜คํƒ€.
  10. ์ฃผ์–ด๊ฐ€ ๋ณต์ˆ˜(์šฐ๋ฆฌ ๋‘˜)๋ผ mind๋„ ๋ณต์ˆ˜.
  11. ํŠน์ • ๊ณผ๊ฑฐ ์‹œ์  ์–˜๊ธฐ๋ผ ๊ณผ๊ฑฐ์™„๋ฃŒ(had).
  12. maintain์€ ์ˆ˜๋™ํƒœ๋กœ. "has been kept clean"์ด ์ž์—ฐ์Šค๋Ÿฌ์›€.
  13. still์€ don't ์•ž์ด ์•„๋‹ˆ๋ผ ๋’ค.
  14. ํ˜„์žฌ์™„๋ฃŒ ์ˆ˜๋™ํƒœ์—” been์ด ํ•„์š”.
  15. footprint๋Š” ํ”์ /๋ฐœ์ž๊ตญ ๋‰˜์•™์Šค๊ฐ€ ์•ˆ ๋งž์Œ โ†’ sign.
  16. ์›๋ฌธ ์˜๋ฏธ๊ฐ€ ๋ชจํ˜ธ โ†’ "์ผ๋ถ€ ๋ฆฌ๋ชจ๋ธ๋ง์€ ํ•„์š”, ์ „์ฒด ๊ณต์‚ฌ๋Š” ์•„๋‹˜"์œผ๋กœ ์žฌ๊ตฌ์„ฑ.
  17. proper=์ ์ ˆํ•จ, ๋น„์‹ธ๋‹ค๋Š” ๋œป๊ณผ ์•ˆ ๋งž์Œ โ†’ too high.
  18. host๋Š” ์—์–ด๋น„์•ค๋น„ ๋А๋‚Œ โ†’ seller. denyโ†’decline.
  19. ์ฝฉ๊ธ€๋ฆฌ์‹œ "entering date" โ†’ move-in date.
  20. ๊ณ„์•ฝ์€ be expired๊ฐ€ ์•„๋‹ˆ๋ผ ๊ทธ๋ƒฅ expire.
  21. execute๋Š” ๊ฒฉ์‹์ฒด โ†’ carry out์ด ์ผ์ƒ์ .
  22. until(๊ณ„์†)๋ณด๋‹ค by(๊ธฐํ•œ)๊ฐ€ ์ •ํ™•.
  23. determine=ํŒ๋‹จํ•˜๋‹ค, ๊ณ„์•ฝ ํ™•์ •์—” finalize.
  24. "์ด๋ฒˆ ์ฃผ์—"๋Š” ์ „์น˜์‚ฌ ์—†์ด this week.
  25. intervention์€ ๋ถ„์Ÿ ๊ฐœ์ž… ๋‰˜์•™์Šค โ†’ with the help of.
  26. "dreaming how"๋ณด๋‹ค "dreaming up ways to"๊ฐ€ ์ž์—ฐ์Šค๋Ÿฌ์›€.